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Thanks for uploading this piece. This seems to be an important topic. I love that you chose something that is socially important, but you have a personal connection to. It takes bravery to talk about your feelings. I especially like how you have a conversational tone with the people you are interviewing. The piece is pretty long... If you were going to cut it down, what parts would you choose as the most important? What parts do you find surprising? true? emotional? Great work!