Melissa-- Thanks for sharing this with us. I love the line "I loved him for a week of the four months we were together" Its a precise description of something many of us have felt, but not been able to articulate. That is what strong writing does. Thank You.
Hey, I'm in Young Chicago Authors saturday writing program. In my freetime I like to write (anything, im still trying to figure out what writing style I like best), read, fence (eepe), and be on the Say What Magazine editorial board and my high school's newspaper. I love to travel and so far have visited several states, as well as Scotland and China.